Critical Essay

Here, I’m going to give my critique on one of my classmate’s speech. The author of this speech is Peter and it is a commemorative speech about his experiment in the subway. During his speech, he said that he won’t forget this occurrence because of the great words that had spoken out by the employee of New York Transit and it will make him remember it forever.

The entire of his speech is about once he takes the train and due to certain reason that the train come so late makes him feel bad and disappoint to the subway line. However, also due to an emergency event that changes his thought. It is an incident about when everyone in the train doesn’t want to help the man who is homeless, smell and feel uncomfortable unless the employee in the train help him and say the words of “may be he has lost home, but he hasn’t lose help” to those who don’t want to help the man. Because of his great words make Peter appreciate him.

Although, this is creative story and he use very good example of rational sense that could happen around us everyday. In addition, the body of speech, he also uses good supporting idea to his thesis statement. In contrast, he could do better with eye contact if he practices more before speech going and will not always looking at the paper and like reading which I think could help him gain better grade. Furthermore, I like the way he use his thought in the speech by his words of “If I only glanced at him, noticed smell from his body couldn’t help me throwing up and from that I consider he is really honest person. Anyhow, the entire of speech, which I think is fine unless I understand it very well by his language use.