The Wrong Step
Essay by 24 • March 25, 2011 • 2,224 Words (9 Pages) • 1,033 Views
Prolouge:
in A.D. 1223 an infant was born, clutching a jewel in her tiny fist. Her peasant father ran to the castle to bring back a priest, but by the time they returned to the hut, the jewel had disappeared. The priest declared that such would be the child's life: all good would slip through her fingers.
The years passed, and the girl's beauty became celebrated. Knights and kings journeyed far to gaze into her eyes before leaving on their crusades. Women and children made pilgrimages to look upon her angelic face. All who saw her felt blessed.
But an ancient evil called the Atrox also saw her unearthly perfection and pursued her, offering her father great treasures if she would betroth it. The girl saw her father's poverty and agreed to the union, making only one request for herself--- that her beauty should last forever. The Atrox agreed, and she pledged her devotion for eternity.
A Follower of the Atrox came to take the young woman to the underworld, but when he saw her beauty and grace, he fell desperately in love with her and she, too, with him.
They tried to hide their love, but the Atrox saw through their deception. When the young woman stepped into the Cold Fire to receive immortality, instead of preserving her beauty for eternity, the flames consumed her flesh and bones, turning her into a wind spirit.
The knight could not endure life without her. The force of his love drove him across the world, searching for a sorceress with the power to restore her human form. As he was crossing the sea, a storm broke out and sent his ship off course to the island of Aeaea, where Circe, an ancient enchantress, lived. Circe gave him a magic potion. With it, his beloved could possess any body she desired.
Since then many young women have felt her presence and wondered afterward what made them act so wickedly, never understanding that for a brief time, the spirit of the wind had taken over their mind and soul.
Chapter 1:
It's nine fifteen by the clock in Mrs. Lambo's room; it should be the end of third period. Forty-five minutes since class had started, and forty-five minutes since Alyssa sat restlessly, her feet stretched out under the teacher's desk. A dull ache had started to pound across her forehead, and Joshua sat behind her, annoyingly braiding and unbraiding her hair.
"The Visigoths believed the dead person was still alive and lived on in the grave, suffering from cold, wet, hunger, and thirst." Mrs. Lambo stood in front of the class, repeatedly tapping the chalk against the timeline she had drawn on the board.
School was different here. Alyssa like physics, but history bored her, because so much of it was wrong. A red book on Mrs. Lambo's desk caught her eye. She read the words on the spine, The History of the Goths, then leaned forward and took the book. Mrs. Lambo glanced at her but didn't appear to object. Alyssa thumbed through the index, looking for a reference to King Tiernan. She found one and turned to the page. The
Lecture became low, humming backdrop as she read.
"Mythical!" she whispered, and a terrible loneliness spread through her. After all the king's great battles and deeds, history had declared him unreal!
"Alyssa, maybe you have something you'd like to add to what I've been saying," Mrs. Lambo said.
Alyssa looked up. Muffled laughter came from the back of the room.
"I was explaining the belief system of the Visigoths before they came in contact with the Christians." Mrs. Lambo steeped closer, sniffed, then examined Alyssa's eyes, her way of testing for drugs. "Perhaps you could add something. What did the Goths believe happened after death?"
Kids in the back snickered. Someone whispered, "Stoner."
Alyssa broke out in cold sweat.
"Well?" Mrs. Lambo took back the book, carefully keeping it open to the page Alyssa had been reading. "We're all waiting."
"The dead keep in touch with the living," Alyssa blurted out, and she rushed on, "so they can warn their family, or the ones they love, if something bad is going to happen in the future. And they defend their burial mound against grave robbers, and sometimes they terrorize their enemy as a draugr."
Mrs. Lambo stared at her, speechless. Finally, she spoke. "Draguer?" Mrs. Lambo pronounced the word wrong.
Alyssa cleared her throat. "The living dead."
Silence ticked around her. She felt everyone staring at her. She was grateful when the bell rang.
Alyssa speed out of the classroom so fast, a jaguar was not fast enough to catch her. She had to be early to her next class, Social Studies, other wise she would be having detention with Mr. Guzman. Mr. Guzman is the strictest teacher in the entire high school. He never lets you talk to anyone without given consent by him or one of five student teachers we have. It seems like he was once a drill sergeant with the amount of things he expects everyone to do.
Just as Alyssa was rounding the bend to her locker, she caught a glimpse of someone standing there. Who was it that is standing by her locker? All she could make out was a black shadowy figure. As she grew closer, she could see it was a guy. He was just standing there playing with his cell phone. His black pants rode dangerously low on his hips. A dark blue hoodie was unzipped to show a faded belt stretched across his tight, yummy abs. He had a silver chain around his neck. With his two whiskers poking through, he needed a shave. A.J. Tortellini turns and smiles at her as she approached her locker.
With a sweet kiss on the lips, he says "Hey there sexy." Every time they kiss, it feels so electric, she can feel her skin peel off and float away and then his skin wraps itself around her to keep her warm and it feels like velvet and then she looks into his eyes. A.J. is a real good kisser.
They met the summer before seventh grade; Alyssa was buying a burger at Wendy's. He was bleeding from a broken nose after a fight in the parking lot. She would have joined him, but by the time she got there, it was over. From that moment on, he gave her glasses for she was like a blind child looking for the right man to sweep her off her feet and carry her away to a castle in the sky. She forget what the fight was aboutÐ'...maybe something stupid like a stolen bike. Everyone told her that
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