Descriptive Writing- First Time

                        AHHHHHHH!!!!!

“Are you sure it isn’t scary?” I asked with a shaky voice. My heart was pounding rapidly and I started to feel uneasy. “Brianna, just trust me. Okay? It’s nothing. Go and sit down. I’ll sit right next to you. Do you remember what you said earlier,” said my cousin, Bradley. I looked over at my aunt, who was just getting off of the ride. I remembered what I said earlier, “I’ll go on whatever ride your mom goes on!” Why did I have to act so confident? Well my aunt went on it so now I had no choice.

I walked slowly over to a row of four seats and sat in one of the middle chairs. These chairs did not ease me. They were black with yellow seatbelts that goes around our shoulders. Bradley sits on the left side of me and my other cousin, Nick, sits on my right side. When one of the workers was fastening all of us into our seats, I knew that it was too late to change my mind. I looked over at Bradley, he smiled widely and said, “I lied this is the scariest roller coaster here.” My mouth dropped open as our ride began. I should have known better than to trust him especially when he says, “trust me.”

There are people screaming everywhere: in front, in back, and on both sides of me. Our ride just started and people were already screaming as loud as they could. I tried to keep my mind calm as we began to slowly rise up, higher and higher. From my point, I could see most of the park. People were as tiny as ants from there. As we reached the peak, I shut my eyes and refuse to look down. WHOOOOOOSHHH!!!!!

The strong wind pushed my small head against the rubber black seat. My head bangs into the back of my seat multiple times giving me a headache. I could feel every sharp turn and twist because with each turn my head would sway along also. I was scared but at the same time I loved the feeling.  I started thinking to myself this isn’t so bad. Why was I even afraid in the beginning? I’m starting to like this. I opened my eyes slowly. We went up, down, left, right, upside down and all around. Roller coasters aren’t horrible they just seem frightening. This was my first major roller coaster ride and all I wanted to do was go on more amazing roller coasters.