My Opinion for Introductory Paragraph

I don't think that the introductory paragraph really introduces the writer's main idea clearly,for using too many questions,but the body paragraph do.First,too many plain questions confuse the reader that which question should they focus on.And these questions also can't arouse the reader.Second,only one question used in this paragraph connected to the writer's main idea.Third,the end of this paragraph means improperly that the writer can't explain his above questions,in other words,he won't explain his questions in the following paragraph.

In the introductory paragraph,in all,the writer uses ten questions.I think that if he only kept one or two questions which are connected to his main idea,the question would attract the reader's attention to themselves and would let the reader know what he want to talk about in the whole essay.The other question can be transformed to declarative sentences to earn the reader's agreement with him.For example,"You must hear that,right?" is better than original sentence "Did you hear that,Harry?".Because,in order to continue narrating,something should be basics and beyond doubt.As you see,the writer uses too many plain questions such as "Do you think that someone is laughing too hard?" "What could it be?" and these questions have lost their inherent function----to catch reader's eyes.Too many questions will looks equal and lose the writer's emphasis at all.As a reader,during my reading I also have a habit ,which is same with other readers,I prefer to find the writer's questions in introductory paragraph,to help me get main idea quickly and accurately.Thus,using too many questions in the introductory paragraph isn't an advisable idea to help readers be involved in the writer's main idea.

According to the whole essay,the writer uses three example to explain his main idea----go ahead to the scream and help others bravely also unremitting.The first example tells us that owing to the neighbor's giving up,the six-year-old adopted girl lay brain dead by her parents.The second example tells us that we have to be brave enough to face many difficulties in the possession of helping.The third example tells us that if we hear someone screaming,we should go ahead to prevent the tragedy rather than standing by and hand-off.But look back at the introductory paragraph,only one question,"What should we do?",suits the writer's main idea.I think this question,the most important one,should be put in the end of the introductory paragraph,to show this question connected closely with the main idea.Because the final sentence is the most impressive words.In fact,on the contrary,this question is surrounded by other plain questions.So I think that there is no obvious indications which shows the writer wants to give out his main idea.

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